Wednesday, May 1, 2019

You Don't Need To Remember Comments

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You certainly don't need to remember my smile,
often I don't smile, nor do you need
to remember my tears
for I'd never cried in front of people
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Bharati Nayak 13 July 2019

You don't need to remember my name, address, youth, aging and my date of birth, even my date of death. For I: — I want you to use all your memory to cherish one November day, madden with crimson, we crossed the purpled field, climbed to the hilltop, my hand was in yours; my head was on your shoulder, my silence entirely belonged to you — - - - - -What a fantastic write! Goes to My Poem list.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2019

love in the pace of lost reminds something on the way of melancholic; sometimes lover does not need to remember it............../// well poetic expressed

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Adeeb Alfateh 27 June 2019

You don't need to remember any. You don't need to remember my name, address, youth, aging and my date of birth, even my date of death. great loving expression great 10+++++++++++++++

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Chinedu Dike 18 May 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. Heartfelt poem with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Joan.

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Joan Xie 28 May 2019

very appreciated your reading, this one is indeed an emotional one.

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Shaojun Li 03 May 2019

arresting poem, vivid imagination and flow very well.

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Joan Xie 28 May 2019

very appreciated.

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Joan Xie

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