You Don't Know My Story Comments
I've been labeled, been tagged in a hurry.
Garments worn on me which were not flory.
yet none has cared to listen for my side.
Yet, have they not stripped me bare of all pride?
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Excellently worded, good rhymes but we only know your story after been reading that. Good point! 5 Stars full score and much much more!
nice poem, beautiful end rhyme, that has enriched the poem, thanks for sharing.
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7/19/2025 3:07:41 AM # 1.0.0
A very pensive hauntingly beautiful write. Touches the heart of the reader. Rhyme, rhythm, choice words, phrases and imagery complements each other. Profoundly emotional.5 *s
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