Saturday, April 16, 2016

You Don't Know Me Comments

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You don't know me...
I am the blind man
Truly seeing the light
In darkest of tunnels
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Richard Wlodarski
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

Please read as: that you have conceived. My Android commits a lot of typographical errors as I type out very fast

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

I am revisiting this outstanding poem. Appreciated the way you have unveiled the multi layers of the theme that you have convinced. I take this brilliant poem to my favourite.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 August 2022

It's always the greatest of honours when a highly esteemed poet revisits a poem of mine and includes it in his favourites. Dillip, you've left me speechless!

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2022

Dillip, I am greatly flattered and honoured by your very positive constructive criticism leading to inclusion in your favourites.

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Bharati Nayak 29 August 2022

You don't know me... I am the dumb poet Speechless by humankind's atrocities Weaving gentle words of pain and wisdom--An excellent poem springing from a good heart.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 August 2022

I too really like that stanza! Bharati, THX so much for your postive constructive criticism. And for your kind comment about my personality.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 August 2022

Bharati, I wish that PH had the good heart to post my comments to you. This is my 3rd attempt! Bharati, I consider it an honour that you believe this poem to be excellent. And I am grateful for your kind comment about my having a good heart.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

I am the dumb man who speaks not but the truth. Excellent.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 August 2022

And that's the truth, Dillip! Happy that you love it!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 July 2017

The walk of life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 20 July 2017

Edward, thank you for reading and commenting.

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