Friday, July 31, 2009

You Don’t Know Me. Comments

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I have my secrets,
That I will not tell,
For they are mine,
That I would not sell.
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Michael Moorcroft
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Candace Johnson 09 September 2009

great write... the way you express yourself is really good... you can almost hear the emotion...10+

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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

I hope a beautiful young princess gets to know you well. Pamela's right you are a good poet. Bob

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Bele Lele 12 August 2009

The first and last stanza are my fave..you are a very good poet.10+

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Cj Heck 05 August 2009

Hello Michael, it's nice to 'meet' you. This is a nice reflective poem. It's difficult, writing about one's self - I know, I've tried it - but you've done well at it. Well done. Warmest regards, CJ Heck

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