You sit there and say,
'You don't know me.
A lie like that
Slips out too easily
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A deep write in deed into the mind of a confident person unafraid to speak her mind and to hold her ground mentally. I enjoyed this tremendously. Well done
I loved this piece.Its a kinda sexy..........probably as sexy as you!
Socretes said, `know thyself'. Great arab sayings is ` if you know yourself, you know your God'. dear carol knowing self is the greatest knowledge for the mankind. Thanks for this piece. More than 10 for you.
wonderful! keep writing! it reminds me of Bon Jovi's song, She don't know me. I enjoy your poem while listening to this Bon Jovi song. God bless you.
A stern lecture indeed! Well deserved comeuppance I would guess. Brilliant execution.
Thanks for your wonderful insight - you give new meaning to the mundane world. Here's someone with exceptional poetic talents. Your intelligence, abilities, and perception shines with every line. Keep writing.
This poem shows that your know yourself and are skilled and comfortable enough to let the reader know too. Tom
well done carol! ! ! very touchy and emotional. you have a great quality to take the reader on the ride.10/10 *
Such an expressive poignant piece, written in a vivid verses........lovely poem...10+++