Wednesday, February 13, 2008

'You Don'T Know Me' Comments

Rating: 5.0

You sit there and say,
'You don't know me.
A lie like that
Slips out too easily
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CAROL HUGHES
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Catrina Heart 23 March 2009

Such an expressive poignant piece, written in a vivid verses........lovely poem...10+++

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Wonderfully written.

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Meggie Gultiano 27 November 2008

this is a brilliant write.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 October 2008

I know you Carol.The woman with ' ummmph '

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

A deep write in deed into the mind of a confident person unafraid to speak her mind and to hold her ground mentally. I enjoyed this tremendously. Well done

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Ameer Mcarthur 17 September 2008

I loved this piece.Its a kinda sexy..........probably as sexy as you!

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Ershad Mazumder 16 September 2008

Socretes said, `know thyself'. Great arab sayings is ` if you know yourself, you know your God'. dear carol knowing self is the greatest knowledge for the mankind. Thanks for this piece. More than 10 for you.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

Wonderful poem, nicely composed. Love it.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 11 September 2008

wonderful! keep writing! it reminds me of Bon Jovi's song, She don't know me. I enjoy your poem while listening to this Bon Jovi song. God bless you.

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James B. Earley 01 July 2008

A stern lecture indeed! Well deserved comeuppance I would guess. Brilliant execution.

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Fred Babbin 30 June 2008

yep. Me and my wife.

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Charles Hughes 18 February 2008

Thanks for your wonderful insight - you give new meaning to the mundane world. Here's someone with exceptional poetic talents. Your intelligence, abilities, and perception shines with every line. Keep writing.

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Tom J. Mariani 14 February 2008

This poem shows that your know yourself and are skilled and comfortable enough to let the reader know too. Tom

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Seema Chowdhury 13 February 2008

well done carol! ! ! very touchy and emotional. you have a great quality to take the reader on the ride.10/10 *

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