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Sometimes that divide is just to wide to cross. This is a fine piece of poetry on a classic theme. You've kept it all well under control - resisted the temptation to make it too complex or to adorn it too ornately - and managed thereby to get your message across clearly. You also display a sensitive, poetic understanding and insight in this that bodes very well for the future: 'knowing' the 'coldness of the snow' takes more understanding than many would suspect. You set the scene very well with that and maintain the standard to the end. Good work Lin. jim