Saturday, February 27, 2010

You Don'T Care Comments

Rating: 4.3

when you look at me
i stop breathing
but you don't care
when you call my name
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emma nelson
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Brenda Arroyo 16 March 2010

It hurts... to feel this way. But I liked how you put it all together.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 04 March 2010

A sheer jilt spurned…. A poetic indulgence poets’ love and you too did it nicely … 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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