You Don'T Care Comments

you know i used to be a saint, going around preaching about how god can save and help us through. but you know im losing my faith. i know how you feel cuz this poem is how i feel today and have felt for the past three years of my life.

this person may not care, but God does.

I feel about this one, the way I do the lasst one. I really can't say one is better but I do want to remindf the writer that the shorter the writing is, the more impact each word has and generally the more memorable the writing. GW62