Saturday, June 4, 2011

You Do This To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can do without you.
But my life,
Without you...
I could not live.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 June 2011

Loved to read. Great poem with vivid imagery and wonderful style. I rate it 10. If time permits, please read and rate my poem 'A farmer' on page 1.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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