Saturday, December 10, 2016

You Do Me No Harm Comments

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If the vanity of your heart
Drives your hand
To trouble the waters of my soul
So that you may hear the songs
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Seamus O' Brian
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Tom Allport 17 April 2017

a compassionate poem which offers openness without recrimination? .............superbly written Seamus.

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Seamus O Brian 18 April 2017

Thank you, Tom! Yes, openness without recrimination is an excellent description of the wavelength I was experiencing when I wrote this. Thanks again, :) S

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 10 December 2016

A beautiful write.10 You may comment on my poem 'Forgiveness'.

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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