Tuesday, February 14, 2017

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Today though beautiful to say
You always in my mind daily.
I missed your touching
Everyday and every night
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Felix Emeka George
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Irshad Tantry 14 February 2017

A nice write, but you need to focus on the spacing of the lines of your poem.Just stacking a bunch of lines on top of each other peturbs the beauty of a poem and hence, the reader doesn't enjoy the poem because he/she gets lost in-between the words.Apart from that, which is not really a big deal, your poem is pretty nice and i really enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing...

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