Friday, June 22, 2007

You Deserve Better Comments

Rating: 4.5

There’s a lone figure on the wharf
She’s been standing there for quite some time
The gentle rain conceal the tears that roll down her cheek
And there’s a whisper of hope that still haunts her
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Raven Keller
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Holly Heron 29 June 2007

oh bk... this is so moving i love it especially these lines: Maybe you’ll remember her face in the crowd The glass child behind unseen eyes your an amazing writer and person and i can't see how any guy can do better then you. with love your hp xoxoxox

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