Sunday, August 12, 2007

You Dance Comments

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Dancing out of rhyme and reason.
Lacking rhythm with a pace too aged,
For the times you are behind.
And yet you request your steps be followed.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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R H 13 August 2007

Some follow, some lead, some shuffle, some weave and some just steal the show but 'dancing out of rhyme and reason' - is a dance that will never flow... great poem Lawrence, really enjoyed this one. jz

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Brian Bird 12 August 2007

Haa haaaa! This really struck home! I taught ballroom for over 10 years! I was the worst student I had ever seen! Really enjoyed.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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