Thursday, February 9, 2006

You'D Never Guess Comments

Rating: 3.2

Last night I wore my purple dress
the doorbell rang, you'd never guess
who walked in with a bunch of flowers
and all his charismatic powers.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 10 February 2006

Yeah! I got it after I read a little further! :) Hey, I may be slow sometimes but I did get this one......I was only confused by the first line when I pictured you in a purple dress! (Nice image, thanks!)

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Michael Shepherd 10 February 2006

Herbert, your neural interconnections never cease to amaze me... your poetry is the very essence of 'never guess'.. a cosmic tour of invention. Thanks for responding to the challenge so muniificently.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 09 February 2006

LOL! ! ! What am I goning to do with you...Thank you for the laugh I needed it! !

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Ronberge .. 09 February 2006

Quite entertaining and creative to say the least. Amicalement votre, R.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 09 February 2006

Thanks guys, and Mary I was impersonating Monica. Best H

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Linda Hepner 09 February 2006

I needed a good laugh! Are you drinking triple shot coffees? Cheers, Linda

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Rusty Daily 09 February 2006

Herbert, you wore me out but the trip was worth it. Rusty

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Mary Nagy 09 February 2006

Quite a poem Herbert! Very entertaining........ I was really wondering where you were heading with you wearing a purple dress! :) Sincerely, mary

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Victoria Martinez 09 February 2006

huh this was freaking awesome you were all over the place... sweet.

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