Saturday, December 8, 2007

You Confuse Me Comments

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What do you want from me?
The vexation I feel around you,
Is beyond comprehension,
Yet I feel so much apprehension.
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Devin McKeever
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River Someday 16 February 2008

Wow that is exactly what i'm going through right now. I understand this poem better then my own. Nice work, You have a talent. :)

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I've been through it as well... many times before. But I liked it. Good work. ~Trysta

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Sen Unknown 08 December 2007

i kind of like it. i been through it so... i kind of know how you feel.

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Devin Mckeever 08 December 2007

NOW that I read it, it seems a bit sloppy Oh well I'd REALLY appreciate your comments! !

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