Sunday, June 20, 2010

You Complete Me Comments

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forever starts the time i met you
it is you who made me whole
im having a new path
thank you for accompanying me with out a doubt
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 June 2010

emotions and words are penned carefully in the poem I think... so that's nice... keep it up Filipino poet!

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Paul Judges 21 June 2010

Very nice poem

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The two becoming one, having one heart! They say this is a great mystery! Lovely poem! ; D

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Joseph Poewhit 20 June 2010

Two souls binding in harmony of life

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emotoin filled lines...smooth and pleasant flow...good work

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Tony Berndtsson 20 June 2010

Thank you for a pleasant read. You can feel the weight of your feelings, but also the romantic magic within them.

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