You Come And Then You Go Comments

at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain simple human feelings and reactions very well portrayed. tony

Really a poignant bit of verse, very passionate with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Great poem. Relationships have their ups and downs. One looks backs fondly on all the memories with certain sweetness and the sting of a thorn. Congratulations for member poem place.

Loved the poem which sounds simple, but highly emotional! Touches the right cord in our heart! The lines which are memorable to me - " at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain and sometimes our tears they fall just like the rain" What a beautiful rhythmic flow!

It falls down to lack of respect from loved ones. Who needs this? Happy Festive season.

You come and then You go just like a whisper in the night You come and then You go.. very fine full of emotions.. thank u. tony

Unsteady love! ! Love and friendship. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

WE ALL ARE BORN WITHOUT EXCEPTION to come then GO You have read my moms smiles also you came and now you go

The poem in a way defines a situation where human relationships are being undermined. There is a sense of casualness or lack of commitment. This is the reality of our time. Thanks & Congrats, Dorsey Baker.

You come and then You go at the table of desire we get pleasure and we get pain/// beautiful writings yeah love comes and goes, love brings happiness, pleasure when it comes with smiling but when it goes with tears then we get pain and hurt inside heart as well as at the table of desire/// beautiful poetic expression

An expressive poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece......10++

Expression of an unsteady relationship. Well written...10.

A very thoughtful and touching write! Thanks for sharing, Dorsey.10+