Sunday, October 30, 2005
You Clipped My Wings Comments
Rating: ★4.5
I've always tried to make you happy,
Living for you and not myself.
All I wanted was to make you proud.
I was always afraid to ask for your help.
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Amanda Lukas
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Alex Y.
23 November 2005
Wow, I love your poem, especially the ending. It sorta adds a dramatic finish, like a cherry on top of a sundae or something...lol, sorry I'm bad at comparisons. Once again, Lovely work. All of your poems are nice.
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8/16/2025 5:50:59 PM # 1.0.0
Amanda you determined not to fly back, is it fair? try to be flexible........somebody will cry I am sure? I like your poem.