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This is a really good poem! So emotional and sad, and its aweful how some children have to suffer that way and then grow up believing every man can't be trusted, they'll only hurt you even more! So sad but real, thats how life is sometimes! Thanks for sharing! ! !

Great poem.Everything is there in this poem.A great exposure to cruelty behind innocence is exposed. I feel very few poems will reflect realities to the world and I feel that every sensitive reader should read and comment on this poem so that the society moves forward.Marks 10

and pills for pain are pills for death ... very dramatic.

An excellent piece... I understand it well.I have written something similair but it hasn't been published.