Tuesday, November 29, 2011

You Change Me. Comments

Rating: 2.2

I've gone from being alone to being at home
He's brought me to life if only he felt this right
He sends the rush to my pulse an electric to my heart.
If Only he Knew how i felt deep inside.
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Kara Aleid was Thomas
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Khalid Loves Cara More 16 December 2011

awwwwwww tehee =D, did I have to read this while you were watching me I blushed! so much! hehe :) thanks ;) ... me without you is like saying a human without a heart can live Impossible and stupid! :) .. I love you always baby =) .. I never wanna go a second without you I tried it and it was worth than utter torture: ( :) xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Charmaine Young 06 December 2011

I love it! It has many emotions to it. It can be read in a couple of ways. I also completely understand it as well!

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Hilton Ball 03 December 2011

that's sweet i wish it was me your were talking about lol just playing but you put allot of feeling into this poem and im glad you found someone too feel so strong about and i hope you and him last i wish you the best and it was a real pleasure that you wanted me too read it thank you

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Benjamin Paa Willie 01 December 2011

Your heart is speaking, your hand is writing, your talent is showing. Good work! Keep it up!

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 01 December 2011

WOW that was really great it had a lot of emotion in it very special u have talent

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Crimson Love 30 November 2011

This is a very emotional, and beautiful love poem, phenmenal job! :)

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Richard Jarboe 30 November 2011

it's hard to express feelings of love. You did, in this piece. good work, ric

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