Friday, May 12, 2006

You Cannot Run From Me Comments

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You think I live in shadows
so you stay out in the light.
You fear that I can hear you.
Oh yes, this time you're right.
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Mary Nagy
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Esther Leclerc 26 May 2006

As I've been thinking about conscience a lot lately, I find that I wish I'd written this poem... A plain but serious take on a not-much-discussed subject. Wonderful write, Mary! : ]

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Brian Dorn 19 May 2006

Mary, might we find the wisdom to embrace our conscience rather than try to out run it... Excellent write! !

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Nimal Dunuhinga 15 May 2006

I hear the inner cry Mary; chain him to a lamp post then he sees the light, if no any progress? do not worry of a runaway horse............when he is tired definitely search the road to the stable?

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Dee Daffodil 12 May 2006

Wow....this is a lovely poem. It's one of those that reaches out and grabs you, shakes you, then settles softly beside you. Hugs, Dee

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Ernestine Northover 12 May 2006

That last verse gives a very warming feeling Mary. A very nice thought out poem, with some strong points there. Nice read. Love Ernestine XXX

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Scarlett Treat 12 May 2006

Safe in Mary's arms - what a lovely place to be! I agree with H., Mary, your free verse is growing by leaps and bounds!

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Rusty Daily 12 May 2006

I simply echo the heartfelt appreciation of your poetry Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 May 2006

Another good one, Mary. You are evolving as a poet of free verse though, believe it or not. Best H

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 May 2006

dear mary, this reads like a song.

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Duncan Wyllie 12 May 2006

The beckoning of the conscience for us to just be still for a moment and listen, I think that this is so needed and so underestimated in the world today, A great poem from a caring heart 10, Love duncanX

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***** ********* 12 May 2006

Yes Mary, I agree the conscience is there for a very good reason, if we listen, we learn. Another 10 good reasons to read you Mary. Loved this little needle of a poem. Tai

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