Friday, May 19, 2006

You Can'T Run Away Comments

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You can't run away
To move could be to die
Looking into those carzed eyes
With hunger shinging in them
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Carrie Everett
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Brian Dorn 19 May 2006

Carrie, not an easy subject matter to write about, but one faced by thousands of young girls. Throughout the poem, and particulary in the line regarding the cops, you've captured how hopeless the situation can be... Good write! Brian

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Carrie Everett

Carrie Everett

Memphis, Tennessee
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