Wednesday, April 4, 2012

You Can'T Forgive Me Comments

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Hair that's messed up by the wind that touches all,
I see you right there, standing so tall.
Your back turned against me, I patiently wait.
This isn't fair. Am I someone you hate?
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Sina Farajzadeh 05 August 2012

Wow. Great poem. I like this poem. I really enjoyed reading. You're talented. Well, the title says that you did something wrong that you want to be forgiven. But you didn't mention what it was! You asked yourself! But with no answer. I liked the paradox of aversion and love. I'd be glad to know your ideas about my poems too. Thanks.

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