You Can't Breath Comments

My last breath was a sunset, Promising the birth of A bright Morning, .....beautiful poem penned; poem of the time being.....congrats for being selected as POD

I can't breathe Yes, I can't breathe Because in this world Human still bringing up the racism in the safety womb of heart Human tolerates still the discrimination by the religions Human loves the inhumane aristocracy, the snobbery in the deaths of poor Yes, I can't breathe Here, on this earth, still human prefers to the colors of the body skin Human is still not taught by the conscience of universal humanity

I can't breathe Though I don't wear tight mask I can't breathe Though I am not confined in the bottom of dark grave

Very well scripted with a great message.......10+++

Racism raising its ugly head with tentacles, suffocating the innocent people, is a matter of grave concern. An intense and poignant poem exposing the truth. Hearty Congratulations Poet Kumbidi for the well deserved POD.......10

Soffocation! ! Black cloud! ! You can't breath; Seeing the ways of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Nice one.. good and quality wise...real 10 Poetry is soul Saturday,18th July 2020 poetry has power and strength and can go to any length poetry is soul and divine nobody on earth can define it Hasmukh Mehta

A poignant rendirend set aside for honest reflection. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Under your knee, You slammed my neck, My pleas were suffocated, It was raining sweats and tears, Where my sounds were sprouted, Mixed them with soil, Killing in the name of race...... horrible.. tony

A great tribute to people who have suffered and are suffering.

Please BLACK African American we usually write African American only, then we know what is meant by that, but you added the word " Black" here (see your Topic(s) . That is too much, Shihabudheen. BUT you wrote here an excellent poem on the occurrences around Floyd. Congratulatiions for Poem Hunter's choice as The Member Poem Of The Day.

A well composed poem of the day. Simply touching. Congrats on your featured piece....10++++