Friday, June 12, 2009

You Can'T Be Everywhere Comments

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Let,
Me live.
My life.
Knowing...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

As I read, I became delighted—an excellent poem. The idea is amazing—last few lines are legendary. 10+++ with pleasure.

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I Am Charlie 12 June 2009

I like it. Perfectly the way it it is. Which is rare. the 3 dots are used to their full value. the pausing, stumbling, but going on words...expressive.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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