You Can Fly Comments

Excellent Lorraine Masterson2 hours ago Very well done. Comment +1 love it Jon Otano3 hours ago

Jon Otano3 hours ago I really like this poem it touched me! ! ! This man

Alexander Maldonado3 hours ago Be killing the softly

Neelabh kumar very nice poem for all of us to save our mother earth and live in harmony Thanks for sharing your views

Pratap Singh.. Excellent n being a Pilot could understood much better, Nice...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Ñ|†å|-|@GåÜ¢|.. very nicethanks Sir

« Delete » Ganesh Brave.. nice

?? ? ?? danuta Want everything but without struggle no real

Re: You can fly (Score: 1) by ladymaybebaby on Sunday, August 05,2012 (13: 16: 56) First, anyone that writes to me, should never think of their thoughts and words as a childish or bad attempt. These words come from you and should be respected as such. All writers know that it takes lots of practice and the more you write the better you get. If you want to be a rhyming poet, then you have to focus on not writing your lines to come up with an easy ending word for each line so you can hit an easy rhyme. Like a love/dove or a hate/late. Use a rhyming dictionary for a while until you master it. It will free up your creativity. Keep writing. -LMB xoxo

You are butter fly So you can fly We are human being We only keep on trying