Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, January 3, 2016

You Can Do It Comments

Rating: 5.0

All of my life, I've had a silly supposition
That you can't end a sentence with a preposition.
But you can do it, it's true;
And I will prove it to you.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 September 2020

A wonderful and unique poem.crafted and delivered by a brilliant mind. So cleverly written.

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Kim Barney 13 May 2022

Thank you so much for the kind comment, Rose Marie!

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Grace Diane Jessen 10 May 2020

Ah, you are the master. This one is great!

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Aw... You are making me blush, but thanks, anyway!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 January 2016

We have so something in life. Nice work.

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Thanks, Edward.

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Hans Vr 08 January 2016

Five marks for the last sentence and a big ten + for this interesting and funny poem.

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Thank you so much for the comment, Hans!

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Ripper Jones 05 January 2016

End with a preposition, end with the definite article, end with the indefinite article, begin with a full stop, end with a comma and so on. In poetry you should be free. I echo your sentiments Kim.

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Thanks, Ripper!

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Spock The Vegan 03 January 2016

I'm confused. I only see 3 sentences in that poem, and only one ends with a preposition. Nice poem nevertheless. Maybe I don't understand prepositions as much as propositions. I've seen more sentences end with those. :)

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Kim Barney 04 January 2016

The last line ends with 5 prepositions: to out of up for

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Wes Vogler 03 January 2016

You are such a silly. Don't know what a preposition is. Never did But I do know a clever convolution when I see one.

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Thanks for the comment, Wes. I sure miss you, old buddy. I wish you could get your account reinstated and be able to post poems on Poem Hunter again.

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Kelly Kurt 03 January 2016

I believe you now hold the record, Kim. : -)

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Kim Barney 10 May 2020

Thanks, Kelly! Maybe I will try to improve on it now!

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Manonton Dalan 03 January 2016

hehehehhe...that's my question before but it's computer that does that hehhehe not a person.

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Kim Barney 04 January 2016

Thanks for the comment, although I don't know what you mean by it.

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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