Good rhythm. I can hear you chanting this. For what it is, I think its good. The piece is about 'self-justification'. I hope it gave you that. I would ask only this: what exactly do you intend it to do for the reader?
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Good rhythm. I can hear you chanting this. For what it is, I think its good. The piece is about 'self-justification'. I hope it gave you that. I would ask only this: what exactly do you intend it to do for the reader?