Wednesday, March 16, 2016

You Came As A Mermaid Comments

Rating: 5.0

This night you came to my bedroom
as a Mermaid.
I know why.
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Dev Anand
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Mj Lemon 24 March 2016

Simplicity combined with innocence and warmth. Well done! A fine verse!

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Mihaela Pirjol 19 March 2016

:) This poem really made me smile...love the way wrote it! This line '' I want to drink out your heart '' - it absolutely stunning!

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