Sunday, December 13, 2009

You Came Along Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the tremulous arc of limitless sky
I walked alone,
with no feel of belonging to earth or ether,
and not knowing why.
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Fay Slimm
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Bonnie Lundgren 05 February 2012

Fay, please read Innocence and Riches. It is a better reply than any comment I could leave here. I wrote it before I read this amazing poem, but I think it a meet answer. Thank you.

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Patti Masterman 01 February 2012

Interesting interplay of emotions; acknowledging innocence lost, while admitting the hungers aroused never satisfied; earthly love is never perfect but its the best thing around I've ever heard of..The lines had a delicious cadence that galloped along..all the best to you, Patti :)

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the spell of love is a heavenly one. Leslie loved how fay ended the poem. flitting conclusion it was.. most fitting.

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Carol Gall 13 December 2009

fascinating fay gave you all and took it too 10

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Fay Slimm

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