You Broke My Heart Comments

looks like you were badly shocked by someone who you loved! ! ! ! foget him dear..don't let any thing break your heart.... even if he didn't deserve you....generally it is a great poem written well.

Let this be your excavation. X

Milady, I love the simplicity in this.. that makes it so real.. gr8t job.. his lost. ciao milady

Rudy i guess if you tried to rewrite it with rhyme it would be more beautiful dear

A heartfelt piece, sometimes we all get our hearts broken, 10 Lynda xx

The emotion comes through in this poem. If you made it up, then you did a wonderful job. If not, then I feel your pain. A wonderful poem. Beautifully done! GW62

Rudy, I once wrote a poem like yours.Different words yet same message. But I hope its not real, i mean, its just fictional right? Anyway, It makes me feel guilty because i know I'm about to break someone's heart-for the good reason though! Great poem there

this poem reminds me of someone i used to know who broke my heart 10+++++++++++.

At times it will take someone you love hitting rock bottom before they will allow you to pick them up again. Let him fall and see no one cares as much as you do and like a runaway dog who was abused after running away he will find his way back to you. All that you can do right now is pray for and him and hope that reality hits him soon.

You're right to blame, he doesn't deserve you. You're like flowing source of sheer thought and sincere love, you can express your feelings easily. Amasing.

well i know how you feel... this poem reminds me of a lot of things.. thanks for it..

this poem shows a lot of emotion. very descriptive. i'm sorry you had to go through all of this pain. It hurts to know how easy it is for someone to break your heart when you loved them more than anything.

its really good, it shows all the emotions that you went through. you must of really loved that person. almost the same thing happened to me. and i cried so much and i never wanted to see him again.

i know how it felt...keep on writing