You Broke My Heart Poem by Rudy Hossam

You Broke My Heart

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You broke my heart at last,
I hope that’s what u were looking for,
Everything we shared,
Everything we planed together,
Ended because of someone,
Who doesn’t even deserve.

You acted weird lately,
Like you forgot what we were up to,
Like I was just a dream,
That vanishes when you wake up,
Like you never were for me,
So I never was for you.

I couldn’t understand why,
But you made it,
Pretty obvious last night,
You had someone else in mind.

Who you thought is ready,
To sacrifice everything for you,
Who you thought is willing,
To give away anything for you,
Who you thought will do,
Better than what I did.

But tomorrow the sun will rise,
And you’ll see what you didn’t see,
In that dark night,
That in this whole world,
You’ll find no one,
Who loves you,
As much as I do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 16 January 2009

The emotion comes through in this poem. If you made it up, then you did a wonderful job. If not, then I feel your pain. A wonderful poem. Beautifully done! GW62

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Kelvin Karani 12 January 2009

Rudy, I once wrote a poem like yours.Different words yet same message. But I hope its not real, i mean, its just fictional right? Anyway, It makes me feel guilty because i know I'm about to break someone's heart-for the good reason though! Great poem there

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

this poem reminds me of someone i used to know who broke my heart 10+++++++++++.

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Rita Hawkins 31 December 2008

At times it will take someone you love hitting rock bottom before they will allow you to pick them up again. Let him fall and see no one cares as much as you do and like a runaway dog who was abused after running away he will find his way back to you. All that you can do right now is pray for and him and hope that reality hits him soon.

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Kassem Oude 31 December 2008

You're right to blame, he doesn't deserve you. You're like flowing source of sheer thought and sincere love, you can express your feelings easily. Amasing.

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Omar Ibrahim 28 January 2009

looks like you were badly shocked by someone who you loved! ! ! ! foget him dear..don't let any thing break your heart.... even if he didn't deserve you....generally it is a great poem written well.

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John Smith 18 January 2009

Let this be your excavation. X

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Milady, I love the simplicity in this.. that makes it so real.. gr8t job.. his lost. ciao milady

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Jihad T 16 January 2009

Rudy i guess if you tried to rewrite it with rhyme it would be more beautiful dear

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Lynda Robson 16 January 2009

A heartfelt piece, sometimes we all get our hearts broken, 10 Lynda xx

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