You broke my heart at last,
I hope that’s what u were looking for,
Everything we shared,
Everything we planed together,
Ended because of someone,
Who doesn’t even deserve.
You acted weird lately,
Like you forgot what we were up to,
Like I was just a dream,
That vanishes when you wake up,
Like you never were for me,
So I never was for you.
I couldn’t understand why,
But you made it,
Pretty obvious last night,
You had someone else in mind.
Who you thought is ready,
To sacrifice everything for you,
Who you thought is willing,
To give away anything for you,
Who you thought will do,
Better than what I did.
But tomorrow the sun will rise,
And you’ll see what you didn’t see,
In that dark night,
That in this whole world,
You’ll find no one,
Who loves you,
As much as I do.
Rudy, I once wrote a poem like yours.Different words yet same message. But I hope its not real, i mean, its just fictional right? Anyway, It makes me feel guilty because i know I'm about to break someone's heart-for the good reason though! Great poem there
this poem reminds me of someone i used to know who broke my heart 10+++++++++++.
At times it will take someone you love hitting rock bottom before they will allow you to pick them up again. Let him fall and see no one cares as much as you do and like a runaway dog who was abused after running away he will find his way back to you. All that you can do right now is pray for and him and hope that reality hits him soon.
You're right to blame, he doesn't deserve you. You're like flowing source of sheer thought and sincere love, you can express your feelings easily. Amasing.
looks like you were badly shocked by someone who you loved! ! ! ! foget him dear..don't let any thing break your heart.... even if he didn't deserve you....generally it is a great poem written well.
Milady, I love the simplicity in this.. that makes it so real.. gr8t job.. his lost. ciao milady
Rudy i guess if you tried to rewrite it with rhyme it would be more beautiful dear
A heartfelt piece, sometimes we all get our hearts broken, 10 Lynda xx
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I would like to translate this poem
The emotion comes through in this poem. If you made it up, then you did a wonderful job. If not, then I feel your pain. A wonderful poem. Beautifully done! GW62