Friday, March 18, 2016

You Broke My Heart.. Comments

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If u are thinking me as stone hearted,
then i say, you broke my heart into pieces,
if u think my heart is a forest,
then you deforested it, even without the trace of a leaf!
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Pranayee Rachamalla
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thank you sir for reading my poem and for your valuable comment!

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Rajnish Manga 18 March 2016

Breaking of a delicate heart by someone held so close is indeed devastating. This has been portrayed in the poem quite eloquently. Thanks for sharing. Now, your story isn't a glue stick, to stick it back, so, i don't need it!

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