Tuesday, July 27, 2010

§you Broke My Heart§ Comments

Rating: 3.0

The pain is too much,
This crack you have caused,
Created a chasm,
From which flies pain,
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Kieran J1996
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Aria Siren 16 March 2013

Ouch. Heartbreak affects people so differently. I like how honestly you captured the desire to hurt the person just as bad if not worse for how they've made you suffer. Relatable and raw.

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Celiene Watts 30 July 2010

woahhhhh! such a cold and icy and dark poem! but its amazing-ly well written and really thoughtful (:

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