Tuesday, October 22, 2013

You Bow Low Comments

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As I glide slyly spreading my charm
Attracting all furtive glances like a swarm
I strut through the garden, the park and farm
In delighting the others I see no harm
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Soumita Sarkar
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Uma Ram 05 May 2015

I feel important when you bow low My order dictates and you follow This act is completely under my paws World'll admire women changing laws Soumita this is too good yaar. Enjoyed...thanx dear

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No doubt God made Eve with a smaller brain But in quality He made no mistake As dumb macho males woo and faint And finds her true colours far too late...... Very good poem and I also welcome you to my page of poems for your esteemed comments

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Heather Wilkins 31 October 2013

Who says woman can't change laws? they sure can nice write

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