Monday, September 7, 2015

You Blame Us Comments

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It was you!
Who broke him into two pieces!
And when he and she came into being,
your magic,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 17 September 2015

Yes, it was God who cut Adam into two. So it is natural for a man to seek his missing half and for a woman to look for her other half! They cannot but love and love all through!

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Bisma Mirza 08 September 2015

great one! ! ! ! ! ! .10 on 10..............

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2015

Love has excited loving nature that is wisely revealed here with wise motive. Amazing sharing...10

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Khalid Saifullah 07 September 2015

Akhtar jawad can imagine anything, liked this unique poem...........................10

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