Ric, I rather like this, that nice off-hand first stanza dealing with such a serious subject! Your line break leaving life as a line by itself bothers me. Maybe break after rest?
If you have time, check out my new website:
jeffersoncarterverse.com
Let me know how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC
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Ric, I rather like this, that nice off-hand first stanza dealing with such a serious subject! Your line break leaving life as a line by itself bothers me. Maybe break after rest? If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC