You Aren`t Alive Comments

There is a great fear, and many people are almost dead, but life is spiraling forward, life is like driving on the highway, nobody is first, nobody is last, everybody is on their own way, that is why we cannot see clearly where they are, however, everything is in the hands of God and He knows what goes on.

A very beautiful and thought provoking poem! You're a star you're multi talented you're the best at what you do your mighty poems inspire hope and love and deep understanding you have deep insights into the human mind stay forever young!

I LIKE STORY, I LIKE DRAMA IN THE POEM BECAUSE PEOPLE HAVE LESS TIME TO READ ALL TYPES OF GENRE OF LITERATURE NOW A DAYS....SO POEM COULD BE 3 IN ONE, , , , HOW EVER, THE POEM I LIKE THE MOST AS THE IDEA IS SUPER AND THE IDEA IS WELL CRAFTED INTO A GOOD PIECE OF ART.....THANKS

Good way of narrating a story. your narrative technique is amazing though it sad saga of life. It's very amusing and entertain along with gloomy feelings it invoke in me. It is strange poem on somebody........ Great poem - keep writing. I give A1 rating....Hope your poem invoke different feelings to readers as it is Multi dimensional......

we choose to live or die, with every step we take... sadly, many choose death. good poem!