Friday, August 16, 2013

You Are Whole World To Me. Comments

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Whenever i don't see u near,
my world seems to be disappear,
i dunno why this thing happen to me,
without u i will never be free,
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Gaurav Pandey
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Unwritten Soul 16 August 2013

This is a nice work songfromsea, just dont write words like dont know as dunno...you as u, always prefer full one...your work is very nice and i love how you use river and sea comparison...nice idea! _SOul

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