Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, June 29, 2011

You Are Ugliest Comments

Rating: 2.3

“You are ugliest woman of world” I lied to wife
She did not loose temper but showed me knife
One more word to this and you will be no more
I thought she was well within her right to feel sore
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Eman Awad 11 July 2011

such a funny poem with a great message that no one really accepts critizism keep it up, amazing

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Diwakar Bhatt 06 July 2011

nicely elaborated.....and the messege in the end....Hilarious.

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Mohammad Muzzammil 04 July 2011

well written! Your word are nice and style is quite impressive to present you matter to express. I like its rhymes along with the selection of beautiful words.

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Unwritten Soul 01 July 2011

You said, u are the ugliest and u got knife treat, the if you say u say u are the most beautiful then u can have another knife freak or nice treat...if she choose knife, mean u tell it cynical..but if sweet said will got nice treat............but i did smile enjoying your funny tales, it nice to smile for that joke...and Hans right, a wisdom hidden but clearly seen there :) _Unwritten Soul

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Hans Vr 29 June 2011

Very well written. I like the rythm and I like very much the wisdom.

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You won’t know the kind of return It may be severe of its kind in turn We are not expert in reading the true mind We yet to master the art and find

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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