Friday, April 17, 2009

! You Are There I Can See Comments

Rating: 2.8

You are there I can see, you are there I can see
Smiling at me with the cool morning breeze,
Those pink wet lips, taunting me as if I can feel,
Making me believe you love me more than I feel.
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Tsira Goge 22 April 2009

Vidyadhar, Very lovely sincere a poem.10... /Thank you... / Best wishes, Tsira

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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

good poem...sweet romantic musical...thanks...10

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Vidi Writes 20 April 2009

Because you could see We readers could read Feelings well expressed here Very strong emotions placed Inside lovely frames of words. Thank you.

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Catrina Heart 17 April 2009

lovely prose written...........well structured! ! !

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 17 April 2009

Very romantically written. Nice movement between lines and etches the image of admiration.

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