Remember that night we three walked a long way back home?
My hand in yours, yours in his
I chattered to your left like a cicada to summer heat
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Your poem is deftly written, and it has to be carefully presented because the situation is complicated. I like the way you show very small gestures that convey hidden meanings and reveal tender feelings. You know your ideal reader will be alert to these signals so you can imply things rather than state them directly. That's a quality of true poetry
Thank you sir, 'imply things rather than state them directly', I'll always keep this in mind. :) Best wishes
You have a wonderful way with words. A very passionate piece elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Anne.