Wednesday, April 30, 2008
You Are The Song Comments
Rating: ★4.5
if i could i'll write you a song,
that takes you to where you belong.
but the lyrics somehow went wrong,
writing it is taking me so long.
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Ency Bearis
25 July 2008
nicely written and it is a song...good work Best Wishes, Ency Bearis
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Michaela Tatualla
25 July 2008
A lovable composition! ! ! Really sweet...Keep it up.....thanks!
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7/23/2025 3:08:47 AM # 1.0.0
words and melody mismatching...that could be the sole enmity there...nothig other is visible in the poem..he, as a song, remains solid in your mind... how could another song come in? therefore enmity and mismatch quite natural...a very good write, Angel...10