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You Are The One Needed To Heal This Man Comments

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The groaning of a mortally wounded man! !
But the waters made it grow,
As the the waters grew up;
Of a great stature whose top was above the thickest boughs,
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Edward Kofi Louis
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 May 2018

Life! ! Oh Life! We all need someone to lean on. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 May 2018

'The groaning of a mortally wounded man! ' - Yes the readers can hear the groaning as they read the poem. As they come to the last line-'But, you are the one needed to heal this man.' - they wonder if the wounded man got the soft touch of the person sought for. A truly touching poem.

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