Monday, February 6, 2017

You Are...The One Comments

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As i write these words its been 10 Ticks full to be a complete turn around.
and i remember i was a fool
Tears in my eyes are so full
this pain was filled full
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Ernest Makuakua
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Susan Williams 18 October 2020

You say i must forget you how can i forget you haw can i forget the one... the one that happens to be you- -a lot of pain in these words

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Ernest Makuakua 07 February 2017

Thank you Very much appreciated

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 February 2017

Love is wonderfully expressed in this poem. Hope is smiling with expression. Wisely penned! ..10

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Ernest Makuakua

Ernest Makuakua

South africa
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