Sunday, November 18, 2012

You Are The Last Snowfall Comments

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You are the last snowfall before the Spring
My mouth catches your snowflake kisses
Knowing that all too soon only reminiscence
Will savor your evanescent being
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Argentine Tango
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Bri Edwards 08 February 2014

maybe it is my lack of interest in 'love poetry that causes me to be cool to this poem. and also that i feel you may have written a more refreshing one if you hadn't tried so hard to use rhymes. but thanks for sharing. bri :) You Are The Last Month Of Long Days It's been a kick to frolic on a sunny eve, each arm bared, with no long sleeve, the sunshine lasting till almost nine or ten, but this will be short; i'm out of ink in my pe

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C N Prem Kumar 01 December 2012

But go you must, and even a heart in love knows not how to change the seasons - Excellent wordings. Nice poem.

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Shihabudheen K J 28 November 2012

This is a strong write bringing pain of grief merging seasons of despair and anxiety

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Anthony Han 19 November 2012

Very great write, I find it refreshing and brilliant in describing the love between the two subjects: D

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