You are the last snowfall before the Spring
My mouth catches your snowflake kisses
Knowing that all too soon only reminiscence
Will savor your evanescent being
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But go you must, and even a heart in love knows not how to change the seasons - Excellent wordings. Nice poem.
This is a strong write bringing pain of grief merging seasons of despair and anxiety
Very great write, I find it refreshing and brilliant in describing the love between the two subjects: D
maybe it is my lack of interest in 'love poetry that causes me to be cool to this poem. and also that i feel you may have written a more refreshing one if you hadn't tried so hard to use rhymes. but thanks for sharing. bri :) You Are The Last Month Of Long Days It's been a kick to frolic on a sunny eve, each arm bared, with no long sleeve, the sunshine lasting till almost nine or ten, but this will be short; i'm out of ink in my pe