You Are That Swan Comments

Intensity of love is reflected in the lines, beautiful.

Wow so romantic poem.sir i enjoy this poem.thanks for shaired this poem....10++++++

With the golden sunshine, With the blue moon shine, Full with wild roses, And shade of Earth A great poem for appreciation, Love the imageries and warm eros. 10+++

Very sensual and full of warm imagery. And by the way, I really really like this one- -A speechless wind- that combination stopped me in my tracks. A 10 for this lovely piece of writing.

Your are the gracious swan Drunken with my kisses blue and warm Land into the lake of my heart Dip your head of desire Into the semi-hot water of longing That fills the valley of my heart With the golden sunshine, With the blue moon shine, Full with wild roses, And shade of Earth.This poem is a very creative and a very nice poem

Wow so romantic subhas.. Beautiful lines