Monday, February 3, 2014

You Are Terminated! Comments

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You are Terminated!
Were the words fell heavy on my ears.

Devoted entire time and life for one work.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Amitava Sur 15 February 2014

Very sad and heartening, I can only say have courage and patience . Because this is the call of the day today. Where oppression prevails. That's why I wrote a poem Killing myself.

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Rajesh Thankappan 04 February 2014

This is a hard reality of our everyday life. Hire and fire. The company never bothers whether we respire of expire. That is the truth. A nice poem.

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Valsa George 04 February 2014

This is not the singular experience of anyone these days when security of job is so shaky! After an employee devotes his/her sweat and toil for the company's development and by the time he feels pride over its overall growth and exults over his/her sense of belonging to it, the person is mercilessly thrown out of employment without even a warning or prior notice! It is so very unfortunate! A realistic picture of the present job scenario! Great Write, Geetha!

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Kanav Justa 03 February 2014

thats a pity for them, , , , , to loose a person like you, , , ,

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 February 2014

But today you asked me to take rest forever.... severe jolt....10 good work will be appreciated but not remembered always one msitake spoils entire carrier

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 February 2014

This poem is an eye opener to all who dedicatedly nurture an organisation but is asked with a remark that your valuable service is no more required when the job in fact is badly required............Geetha.............a freakish fancy on the part of employer................thanks for sharing

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 February 2014

The title of the poem is a hard statement to hear in life. Hard work is to no avail. Realities nicely put in the poem. Thank you.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 February 2014

wonderful writing my dear poet, This is the truth really.

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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