Monday, January 27, 2020

You Are Still Mine Comments

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Near or far,
Awake or asleep,
Happy or sorrowful,
You are mine.
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Arun Maji
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Kingsley Egbukole 27 January 2020

The claim of love. Beautiful

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Rajendran Muthiah 27 January 2020

She is the poet's in ups and downs. Excellent theme. But the three lines " How many men..... In your river" has a negative effect on the poem, I think.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 January 2020

How many men swim in your river lovely meet-a-phor You are mine Only mine hope the river is not too swift

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