Wednesday, June 11, 2014

You Are Still Alive Comments

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Many years have spent
Many nights have passed
Many people came and gone
Many happiness came and gone
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Fatima Obaid
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 12 July 2014

not an erasable matter. it creates a loop that bend you all over the life.. a true love never dies or erased... lovely heart.. simple but so emotional quest...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 July 2014

Sad poem about fickle jilting love. But u wrote it creatively. Great to read u again. Ramazan mbaruk

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 July 2014

a wonderful and lovely poem.

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 July 2014

a wonderful and lovely poem.

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Kirti Sharma 11 June 2014

For world I have lost you But for me I have got you nice lines...

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